It's so strange how sometimes words flow so effortlessly, and other times I stuggle just to get a sentence to make any sense. here's a section that I think works well from my last paper:
Being adopted allowed me realize many things. I’m glad that I was able to see two very different places. I had experienced life with a single parent in South America. I remember seeing snow for the first time in the Andes and finding Easter eggs nestled in the grass up in the mountains. I can remember the dry heat from the desert and the way cacti wizzed by on the bus ride from Antofagasta to Santiago. I can still taste the salty Pacific Ocean and how it looks different from the Atlantic. It’s so strange how traveling from Chile to Massachusetts is pretty much a straight line, the time barely changes, but the seasons and stars are opposite. I remember running around at a zoo and watching the leafy palm trees blow in the dry wind.